I just looked at the settings for this blog and realized that it was set to only allow registered users to comment, and that is unfair and lame. So now if you feel like commenting you don't need an account to do so.
I am gonna leave this post as a spot for people to comment on the fanfic (ideas, questions, criticism, general hate/praise, etc.) so get to it (name ideas are very welcomed).
I've re-read the chapter, still tastes fine ;)
ReplyDeleteI've read Spike's flashback too, it'll be interesting to see it inside a full chapter. One day or the other I'll ask you what works inspired you in writing this, I'm curious to see if how I imagined the ships and bipedal aliens matches somehow your own ideas. Just not now, I need some more chapter to visualize your universe ;)
well,I plan to reveal alot more about the hostile aliens in chapter 2 (im writing it right now). Also, i'm gonna go ahead and say that i got a lot of inspiration for the sci-fi things from games like Mass Effect(the first planet they go to is named after a non-important planet in Mass Effect), and i plan to draw a bit of inspiration from halo and starwars for certain planets. . I also intend to try to draw some things, but i can't draw very well with a computer.
ReplyDeleteOh yeah, i get inspiration for the armor from Halo. Imagine them all with the basic armor and they don't wear helmets ,except when on certain planets, and when they do it looks like the HAZOP helmet(unicorn helmets have a spot that their horns come out of)
ReplyDeleteRight, sorry for the late feedback. I've read the second chapter, and it seems quite fine imho. Just a couple grammar mishaps and a pair of misplaced commas. The level advancement à la Fallout: Equestria is a tad too much imho though :/
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