The Rainboom Files

I got the idea (from Twilightsnarkle of ponychan's /fic/ board) to do a story version of the introduction of Space Ponies (the title is staring to grow on me). The result is a story im calling "The Rainboom Files". It is still in early development, but have a link anyway. I'm attempting a narrative style that i have never attempted before. The story is being told through the journal of a pony who has spent his entire life gathering the truth about all the events leading up to the pony creation of F.T.L.(Faster Than Light) travel. I'm not sure i like it so far, I'm not sure i dislike it either. I would go through it and read it but it's almost 12:30 A.M. where i live and i am tired. Audience, you read the 2  3  6  10 pages i have written and let me know what you think of it so far (most importantly the narrative style).