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Wednesday, July 20, 2011

The new poll.

I just finished The Rainboom Files and i think it is way better (from a grammatical standpoint) that Space Ponies chapters 1 & 2. I know Space Ponies (i'm gonna start to ask for titles) has the potential to be awesome, it just has a lot of errors holding it down. So I thought i would go back and edit them, but I think that it would mostly be a lot of deletion. There comes the poll, what do you (the small yet overly important audience) think i should do?

2 comments:

  1. How would you go about rewriting it? Would you keep the main plot points already used and introduce them differently, or would you go for a completely new story arc?

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  2. i would keep the plot as it is. I might add a few things, definitely delete a few things, might make chapter 2 longer, the story would be the same just...updated. The only problem is that i have some ideas floating in my head for some more things to right and rewriting would take plenty of time.

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