Sorry about this.

I'm not going to be working on Space ponies as often as I thought. I have become involved in a project to ponify the Lord of the Rings movie script (because to do the book would require far to many characters) but if any of you are interested in helping i have set up a ponychan thread where you can help.

I will still be working on Space Ponies but do not expect a completed chapter 2 for at least a week (or this project might die and i can get back to Space Ponies)

IT IS COMPLETE!

I just finished it. It is (hopefully) going to get reviewed by some /fic/ reviewers soon. I hope to find enough time to complete chapter 2 rewrite in 3-4 days (at the most). Thank you if you have been patiently waiting this entire time. If you would post your thoughts in some comments here that would be awesome because the thoughts of the audience (all of y'all) help me write better chapters and, in the end, a better fic.

Chapter 1 rewrite almost done, give me like an hour or two.

I have been unable to find a lot of time this week to do any writing (planed on having chapter 1 and 2 done by now) but i almost have chapter 1 done and hope to have chapter 2 done in a few days. Just thought i would post this for anyone wondering what's taking so long.

Hello PiggyMcCult people. Oh and other ppl.

As the tittle said, Hello. How do i know that you are viewing this? There is a spot that allows me to see who comes to my blog from were (pic of it after jump). Was bored and thought I would make a post about my ability to see who comes here from where. Thanks Ninja Pie for telling others about my fic.
Also, I would really enjoy it if you ppl would comment on the posts i ask you to or when I ask for you opinion.
P.S. Chapter 1 rewrite is almost done, I can't seem to find time to work on it for long periods of time (Damn internet and responsibilities distracting me) but it will soon be here. Might have it done midday tomorrow.

Sweet idea!

O.k. on the pony KYM page we were having a regular day of image dumps and /oat/ style conversations (well, maybe not as random but still pretty random) and then a Brony called RandomMan posted a pic that gave me some ideas. Pic and ideas after the jump.

Well.

Sorry to anyone that was waiting for new stuff lately. I was away from the internet for 2 days and couldn't really do anything. The poll finally has a winner (i know i said i would keep the rewritten version's plot the same but some people didn't like the thought of a pony-human war) and i already have a look for the antagonist species (I think fast). O.k. then, back to writing.

OVER 100 VIEWS!

I'm so happy about that. I honestly expected this blog to be the greatest thing since sliced bread when i released it to my fellow bronies on KYM. I't didn't happen like that. There have only been a few people to check back here every so often (and they rock) and hopefully this blog will get lots of attention when i finally make a story good enough to send to EqD. That reminds me, i manage to get around the Google docs thing and am giving y'all a new link to the story (i had to make a new document).

P.S.: i need that tie in the votes to be broken. I gave my first chapter to someone a while back and they disliked the thought of a human-pony war, that is why i am asking about a different antagonist. They would still act like the human antagonists, they would just look different.

P.P.S.: Google docs is derping, i can't update the story right now but y'all can read the first paragraph that i wrote and get full of anticipation. I will update this post when Google docs stops derping.

P.P.P.S.: Google docs is no longer derping. Feel free to watch as i write the story and get your two cents in.

Space Ponies (working on a better name unless everybrony thinks it's good) is currently undergoing rewriting.

you read the post title correctly. It is happening NOW! If you wanna watch me butcher the English language or have some direct input or just wanna see me write the story, here you go, talking in the chat box(to me or somebrony else)while i write is perfectly fine with me. Hope to see this story end up good enough to send to EqD. Google docs is being stupid and flagging me whenever i start a new document, Space Ponies (new) is apparently off limits until i get this problem fixed.

voting update and a plead for a bit of proofreading.

O.k. I'm leaning to simply redoing Space Ponies (and the title) from the ground up. The general plot will still be there "Ponies go to space war not ready for what they might encounter, 3 of the mane 6 are on a team together While (spoilers ahead) while the other 3 are being "held captive" by the enemies (spoilers end here) and the plot of chapter 2 might suffer only minor alteration and extension.If you wish for something different to happen to it simply post a comment. DIFFERENT MORE IMPORTANT THING: if anybrony can hook me up with a proofreader or 2 that would rock. Even one of you bronies reading this would work. I would use the review bronies on /fic/ on ponychan but they tend to get swamped pretty easily and i tend to get extremely nervous when i stop writing and need something proofread. That was a long post. Oh slightly cool/interesting thing after my first page break

My first thing for the Writers Training Ground.

I figure i might as well post this here as well, the theme is to write about a pony having a dream and how they react to it when they wake up. I'm an overconfident idiot and decided to do one focused on Pinkie Pie. So feel free to click that word up there and watch me attempt to write this thing. BTW you can find the WTG group here  and this thread you can toss a story into and get it reviewed here (until that thread gets filled and they make a new one). Just realized that it was set to private, it is now open to anybrony with th link.


DONE. Needs some proofreading or just reading in general.

The new poll.

I just finished The Rainboom Files and i think it is way better (from a grammatical standpoint) that Space Ponies chapters 1 & 2. I know Space Ponies (i'm gonna start to ask for titles) has the potential to be awesome, it just has a lot of errors holding it down. So I thought i would go back and edit them, but I think that it would mostly be a lot of deletion. There comes the poll, what do you (the small yet overly important audience) think i should do?

The Rainboom Files is done (for the most part).

I just finished typing The Rainboom Files an I'm pleased with how it turned out. I tossed a link in the link section. Let me know what you think and how i could improve it.
BTW, there is a slight twist ending that i felt sad writing.

Well damn Canada.

This is a snapshot of my pageviews per country and all i can say is, well damn canada. looks like somebrony/somebronies over there like this blog. Italy is also up there, the US still leads the group though.

The Rainboom Files

I got the idea (from Twilightsnarkle of ponychan's /fic/ board) to do a story version of the introduction of Space Ponies (the title is staring to grow on me). The result is a story im calling "The Rainboom Files". It is still in early development, but have a link anyway. I'm attempting a narrative style that i have never attempted before. The story is being told through the journal of a pony who has spent his entire life gathering the truth about all the events leading up to the pony creation of F.T.L.(Faster Than Light) travel. I'm not sure i like it so far, I'm not sure i dislike it either. I would go through it and read it but it's almost 12:30 A.M. where i live and i am tired. Audience, you read the 2  3  6  10 pages i have written and let me know what you think of it so far (most importantly the narrative style).

Space Ponies (that is a terrible title) now on hiatus.

I have decided to put Space Ponies (I really need to think of a better name) on hiatus. I sent it to a few reviewers (Twilightsnarkle and Kim Fluttershy Dykas) on Ponychan and they helped my see some errors and flaws in the fic. I am gonna do the writers training ground thing on deviantART. I will still use this blog to post interesting thnigs/ideas and to get ideas for stories that i right for WTG. 

IDEA!

I just got the idea to make my story into a pony-less version as well as a pony-filled version. That way people who like ponies and people who don't can both enjoy it (and the people who don't like ponies can read it, then read the pony version as a first step into th herd). Thoughts?

Comments

I just looked at the settings for this blog and realized that it was set to only allow registered users to comment, and that is unfair and lame. So now if you feel like commenting you don't need an account to do so.
I am gonna leave this post as a spot for people to comment on the fanfic (ideas, questions, criticism, general hate/praise, etc.) so get to it (name ideas are very welcomed).

HELLO PEOPLE!

Hello person/people reading this. I am supermonday (i'm pretty sure you read that somewhere else first though) and this is my first blog post. What do i type....um....OH I KNOW. As you can probably tell be my avatar thing, i am a brony (read up on on what that is here) unless i changed my avatar to something not pony. I'm gonna get this out first, I'm not that interesting, what i mean by that is that i don't do lots of noteworthy stuff but i do think up lots of stuff and will probably post them here (unless i forget that i made this blog). I am writing a story and would like for any bronies here to read it and provide feedback (that is actually the main reason i made this blog) you can find the link to it....somewhere...i'm not sure where yet (i'm new to this blog stuff) if you have anything you wish to say you can use this place to say so (feel free to share random thoughts, that is how innovations happen). Can't think of anything else to say soooooo BYE.