Chapter 2 getting started

I have finally found time to start chapter 2 =) I'm probably going to post the link to the WIP document later tomorrow. Chapter 1 is still being refined but I think it is as good as done. Quick list of the things I plan on changing in chapter 1 and a question about chapter 2 after the break.



List of changes for chapter 1:
-Replace Big Mac with some OC (the reviewers over on /fic/ keep suggesting I do this, I decided I might as well and save Big Mac for a different part later)
-Fix the damn intro (No matter what I do it never seems to come out right) (hope it works now)
-Change Spike's death scene (his death in the rewrite was a bit abrupt and I figure I should alter it)
-Make the derpy scenes funny(ish) again
-Give a hint about what happened to the rest of the mane 6
-Try to improve the dialog (It always comes out as wooden and needs more emotion, I need a damn thesaurus)
-???
-Profit

QUESTION: Would you like chapter 2 to be the same length as it originally was or longer (almost twice as long)?

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